Step 8 of 13 · Cold Email That Gets Replies
Full example — steal the bones, not the fake company
Full example — steal the bones, not the fake company — step 8 of 13 in Cold Email That Gets Replies. Subject: Note on Northline /pricing Hi Mara — I write product emails for B2B tools with messy trial-to-paid paths.
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Subject: Note on Northline /pricing
Hi Mara — I write product emails for B2B tools with messy trial-to-paid paths. On northline.dev/pricing the middle plan is $79/mo but there is no sentence for who should pick it versus the $29 plan, so people stall. I did a 3-email onboarding sequence for a similar usage-based tool (sample: [link], 640 words, labeled sample). If you want, I can send a 15-minute written teardown of that pricing block — 12 bullets, no call — by Thursday. Either way, thanks for the time. — Jordan, [portfolio or Google Doc]
Pro tip: Read it out loud. If you would be embarrassed to have it forwarded to their Slack, it is still too salesy. Cut the adjectives.
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